Thursday, February 10, 2011

A.P. was our Star Author this week! Here's her story:


Once ther was a mirmade named ava  she had butful long  blound hair and her tale was pink. one day she saw a big ugly shark she was as skrd as a puppy and she swam as fast as lian. wen she got home she was balling like a baby.  Her mommy  Willa rapt her smoth arms around her  and her daddy andy wakt threw the door. He a sk hrr what
was rong. then he wakt away .the next day ava wakt by her best frend star and kaiya.they askt her wy did  you swem away. Because a big agly shark they noted ther head.then her teather mrs.corsino the star fish  ther class room was a beach char.then the big ulgy shark swam in then abby skrimd.then Johnny the fish swam by  and skrimd. then Vivian the doiphin swam by. and she skrimd  then jake  the lobstar crold  by and laugh then ava seed this is a good  shark  then they had a good ending   to that part. Then gale the fish sead we are all frinds.    Then  Jordan sead I am glad  that we are all frinds. then they smiled  Jordan is a  good shark.  

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