Thursday, March 17, 2011

Dominic was our Star Author this week! Here's his story:


This story is about a ninja   1.              My ninja ninja;s name        is  Riley  and    he   likes     to   steal     stuff.     He       likes   to     steal  big  packs of   gum.     He    likes  to  eat  the  gum. AND when the  gum is all gone he keeps  stealing it all  the  time.      a     stranger sees  him   doing it  and he calls the police  and the  ninja  was  to   fast    for         the   police    and  they   keep  going   all  day  long   trying  to  catch   him.     Finally they  caught   him  and  put   him    in   jail.   So Riley   is     because   he has  no more gum to eat.If      Jason   goes  to    vist  Riley  he  will  give him some gum.SO   the  gards    saw     Jason   give     him the   gum     and  JASON got  put   in   jail  with   Riley.   Aft a   year they got  out    of   jail.    They   got    jobs  to  by  gum every  day  in   the  morning.        When  they      got    jobs   to      work    at  Publix.  They  cut   the   meat  for the  customer  and wrapped   it       in  a  package.at   the  end of  the week they  got  the    their  pay check     So  they      blew     it     all    on   gum.           So  th they    went      home           and    they shared   it with    their   family.   So    they     had    contest  to   see   who  blew     a    biggest  bubble.Riley   blew the  biggest  bubble so  Riley  won.AFTER  a  while   they  got  tired  of  chewing  gum  so  they  saved  their  money  to  buy  a  DSI.   It      took   about  2        in  a   half   weeks    to   earn    money

Friday, March 11, 2011

This week, V.V. was Star Author! Here's her story:

                                   
HOW MUCH GIRL TIME CAN WE GET

When me and my friend had a sleep over everything was fine untill my dad came and said I have to go work in 5mi so get reddy to go to the prom and all but why I am gone you two have to watch sam juilyonas little brother my little brother 1 of them said the other 1 said you got to be kidding Mr.Jo no I am not why cant you call a babby sitter because  me and her dad are still not shur about this prom thing but we are both 16 we are old anouf to go to a prom well if you can take care of sam you can go to the prom so here he is you be good said dad to my brother I will said my anoing little brother but I did not say that cause I did not want to get in troble so I keped it to my self wyare going to do with him he gust play                                                              with him yes why no resen oooooo ok bye bye so what do you want to do sport go play sports ok you go play whill we watch tv I meen get reddy for the prom oooooooooooooooo said my brother ya ooooooooooooooooooo just go play so  afder a whill we were reddy and my dad came back we told him how sam was and all that so he said ok you can go to the prom so we went we had a great time I gus we can get some girl time today.